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Equinox



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PostSubject: Never Forget   Sun Oct 02, 2011 8:25 pm

Pitch black, one can’t see
Stuck like an outcast
Dark veiled sea
Rewind back, back to the past
Time for a forecast
Let’s get passed

Pitch black with an eyestrain
Wouldn’t know HOW to explain
This feeling of being contained
Thoughts running lose and hard to maintain

Little better … Now comes the reign
Take out 1 or 2, now what remains?
Answers so plane
Fast forward now, try to regain

Nothings done in vein
Hope for the future, got to sustain
Best friend music, bringing out courage
Able to concentrate, with new found knowledge

Easily bruised heart, placed with a bandage
Lowered down defense, like a drawbridge
Can’t stop, looking to the distance
Scary yes, but doing it with guidance

Dimmed light, it was almost withered
Almost toned out, like a storm in a blizzard
Ups and downs… won’t always be the victor
But still deep inside, got that Vim and Vigor!

End~

read to this a friend, said it reminds him of the song "row row fight the power" o.o
maybe the way i read it...

yea!
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PostSubject: WoW   Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:36 pm

This is wonderful, is this all your words? Never knew you was a writer. you've captured an image, an story. very nice. Looking forward to more of your work. cheers



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Equinox



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PostSubject: Re: Never Forget   Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:22 pm

yea it's all me. i'm just giving it a shot really, so i don't really consider myself a writer. although it's fun.
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PostSubject: Re: Never Forget   Fri Oct 14, 2011 1:15 am

if you took this serious hmm you wud be the best on this site in my eyes at least
promising work i muss say
and row row fight the powah sounds like gurren laggan to me love that show watched it twice
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PostSubject: Re: Never Forget   Sun Oct 16, 2011 7:01 pm

crazykidjaheem14 wrote:
if you took this serious hmm you wud be the best on this site in my eyes at least
promising work i muss say
and row row fight the powah sounds like gurren laggan to me love that show watched it twice

Wow thanks! I have a bit more courage now.
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